Verse 1
If I got down on my knees
And said that 'I love you',
Will you believe? Will you agree?
If I climbed on to your balcony
Be your personal Romeo,
Will you believe? Will you be pleased?
Chorus
Oh, anyway you want I'm ready
All you need to do is tell me
'Cuz I... All I wanna do is love you
I just want to love you
Anyway you want to
Verse 2
You're not to blame
I know you've been hurt before
I know it hurt you really bad
But believe me, I'm not like them
Won't ever let you cry; No!
No tear shall flow from your eyes
Chorus
Oh, anyway you want I'm ready
All you need to do is tell me
'Cuz I... All I wanna do is love you
I just want to love you
Anyway you want to
Bridge
When you need strength, I'll be there for you
When you need passion, I'll be there for you
And when you need some good good lov'in, I'll love you
Chorus
I just want to love you!
Just want to love you!
Anyway you want to!
Copyright © Saad Khan 2009 (Karachi, Pakistan; saadkhalidkhan@gmail.com)
14 comments:
Interesting song Saadi. I like the first verse. Great picture also.
@ Write Girl
Thanks! A friend of mine said it's way too simple but she liked it!
Let's see what the rest say!
Thanks for the visit!
It's simply GREAT!
@ Kalpak
Thanks for the visit, buddy!
Hello there, Ajey directed me here.
I ran through a couple of your earlier songs. They are good and prove your potential to me. Some of them had Ajey's name tagged with it. Your collaboration seems to be working very well.
I choose not to believe that this is one of your good songs. If this is one of your early day songs, this is acceptable. But, judging from the maturity and quality of your earlier songs, this one falls way behind the bar.
I like a few lines; mainly the bridge. But, the others are weak. This phrase "personal Romeo" is ready to drop. A few grammatical mistakes I detect here too.
I do not read Ajey's comment here which implies he is not aware of this release.
Good luck with your writing!!!
@ J
Thanks for the visit! And yes, this is from about seven months ago!
Ajey and I have put down songs together before but I want to have the whole art down to pat so putting them down as I write them and later on correct them and put them up again here.
I'll look into the corrections you've stated.
Cheers!
Gee Saad, been going through your songs and comments, some are harsh or picky... how do you go with negative feedback. Im no expert but I think your doing some great work... keep at it :)
@ Abbey
Everything is welcome! Often I'm too much in love with my work to spot the flaws! So it's you guys who help me out of the things! :D
Ah!! this was so very cool :) really nice !
@ Pretty Me
Thanks for the visit! :D
Finally, I am here to read this one. Well, I got a feedback from someone, you know who.
Well, unfortunately, I agree. You can work on this to make it better. I know you can.
Good luck with that!
@ Brosreview
Yeah, not one of the better ones! I so badly have to work on this!
Thanks for the visit!
I loved the 1st verse!! nice song... and a little different from the usual ones I've read from u.. and maybe u could edit the 2nd verse a little but overall.. nice song... and very sweet! :D
@ Anushya
Yeah, I need to edit ALOT of my songs!! but thanks for the input and mega-thanks for the visit!
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